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The Massive Maiden of Evandor

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The Massive Maiden of Evandor
by Xenny Diemes

Once upon a time in a land far away stood a very fair and lovely maiden vixen named Jauna. She lived peacefully in the quiet town of Evandor. Not only she is lovely but sexy to boot: Long smooth legs, a modestly plump yet firm backside, a great pair of bountiful breasts and a body that can rival and beat any maiden in the land. But she is modest and never flaunts herself to gain the wrong attention or to make anyone hate her or the wrong reasons. Jauna is kind, gentle, good with the children of the village and always a model citizen to the end. But there is one pet peeve, a forbidden fruit in her stack that she hoped never would show among the people for they won't understand. Jauna has a immediate crush on a lovely young female ranger named Aurtura. A strong female wolf who lives for the life of adventure and as a local resident of Evandor is also the town's noble defender.

Jauna never blatantly shows her affections for Aurtura but does supply her with food, shelter if needed and all the care that only a lover can supply. This is something Aurtura appreciates but never truly shows, for she too has affections for the most fair maiden in Evandor. However this is not without its jealous detractors, and that's the case of a bitter young mistress raven named Haela. Haela is also the most fairest maiden in the land with all the features that can rival that of Jauna but because of her sass attitude and unknown aura of , the people around her either pass by or don't even want to bother with her in favor of giving Jauna all the love and attention leaving Haela in the dust. This really upsets Haela and her personal pleas that she herself can be like Jauna only gets brutal talk downs of her petty, selfish need to be like Jauna when all she wanted is to be loved.

This seriously angers the raven and really made it to the last straw when in the night of the Autumn Festival when Jauna has finally gained the strength to announce her love for the ranger that for many years has gained affection for. Only in turn for the now stronger and wiser Autura to return the same love for her. Normally anyone would see this as a blasphemous affair but for the people of Evandor, they stood up and applauded even some to push Haela out of the way to get a close-up. The raven has had enough and now sets out to find a way to put an end to Jauna's perfect life once and for all. The jealous raven searched high and low for a number of good sorcerers, witches or anyone who is good with magic and can do her damage at a fair price. After much searching, Haela has found one in a local warlock named Rutan who is more than willing to put up a spell contract on the fairest maiden of Evandor for seven pieces of gold and three pieces of silver and by tomorrow, he'll ugly the living shit out of Jauna to the point where suicide will be the only option for her.

All was going well for Haela except for one very little thing, Rutan as good as he is was never a personally responsible person. Always getting himself caught in bed with other ladies of married men, irresponsible with his own magic and has gotten in serious trouble with the big wigs of the magical authority. Now armed with gold and silver he was free to do what he wants until the day he attacks Jauna. Sleeping with the local whores, using his magic to "enhance" them to satisfy his own loins and sexual needs and bought enough booze to kill five moose ten times over. It was a real bad state for the warlock the next morning as Rutan is totally wasted and his head pounding in the resulting hangover needs to finish the job. Rutan searches high and low in a pattern even drunks find dizzying but eventually he finds the vixen at a nearby stream and readies his magic... if he he can remember what it was.

But he screws it up by hitting the vixen with a massive torrent of energy that shreds her clothes and knocks her out cold while Rutan himself goes out cold to sleep off the rest of the booze. Slowly waking up with the dew filling her lungs, Jauna notices she felt totally different, all of her clothes are gone, leaving herself completely naked, but that wasn't the worst of it. Her body felt far much heavier, bulkier to the point she can feel everything swelling and contracting all over her body. Its when she looked at her hands Jauna discovers in shock, her body has been changed radically. She can't even look over her now over-inflated beach-ball sized and firm-as-boulders breasts. Her biceps can rival the size of small wheels and her thighs and legs have the thickness of tree trunks. When she tries to reach to scratch the back of her head she had to retract it for the simple reeling of her arm made every muscle on her arm shoot out with great mass Jauna feared her arm would explode if she would reach to scratch. Jauna is getting frightened fast and is trying to gather her thoughts as she stands up but then sees that she is nearly towering over everything.

Feeling dizzy for a second the over-sized muscle vixen needs to rest and leans herself against a tree only for her strength and weight to break the once mighty tree like a twig. Jauna's fear is only making things worse as she walks back into town making footsteps that cause the ground to shake. Back in Evandor the quaking footsteps of a monster was all coming through their minds but it was then changed into the shock and terror of a towering, twenty-foot tall scared vixen coming into view. Many were already afraid and calling monster at it, completely forgetting that it was once the fairest maiden in all of the town. The sounds and cries were music to Haela's ears as she was in her house doing her personal studies and would love to see the result herself but is in shock to see that this wasn't what she wanted. Sure, she wanted to make her into a pariah but she also wanted to make it so Jauna would off herself from the overbearing loss not be made into a titan.

Haela searched high and low for the warlock until she finds him sleeping off his drunk ass in the bushes and brutally wakes him up with a hard backhand. Grabbing him by his shirt Haela angrily asks him why did he made Jauna a titan and not ugly. His alcohol-fueled answer was simply that a muscled female is sort of ugly because who would ever love a woman that looks and is stronger than the most virile male. Immediately dropping him it would seem that Rutan has got a point but Haela would have to see where this is going and runs back to the town to see what has happened, Haela asks a nearby towns person about what has happened and he said that the giant vixen has runs off into the forest crying while quaking the ground with her footsteps. Walking away she knows that maybe this will do just fine.

Deep in the forest and at a nearest cliff Jauna falls on her knees crying up a storm of all the mean things the townspeople say about her. Completely forgetting of what she once was and the voices that echoed on didn't make things better at all. This was the point where she really did want to kill herself because she couldn't bare what her long-time love would think of her should she lays eyes on her freakishly muscled body. She takes a leap off the cliff and fell thousands of feet before slamming into the ground only making a deep impression and not having any effect. She then finds a bushel of Tquecku Berries which by far are the most poisonous berries nature can ever produce. Strong enough to slowly kill all the herds of over-sized buffalo in existence with just one berry alone. Jauna took it upon herself to take all handfuls of berries at once hoping it would do the job, only to give her a mild stomachache.

No matter how much she tried her body will never allow herself to be killed for its too enduring against anything she throws herself at it was impossible. Drowning herself, but her lungs are strong enough to make the thickest of water and make it breathable as air. Even trough the harshest snowstorms and highest heights, Jauna leaps off the highest ledge to crash to the ground below only for her to feel nothing and leave a large crater around her that is deeper than her own body is high. She was convinced that nothing can hurt her internally or externally and her cowardly notions aren't strong enough for her to face anyone so she finds the farthest parts of the forest to be alone and slowly weep. It has been days since Jauna's disappearance and the townspeople searched high and low for the maiden specially Aurtura who misses her so much and dares not think of the worst.

Using keen senses alone, the wolf searches deep into the forest to find Jauna leaving the town temporarily unguarded, as if they have lost their favorite maiden, Haela sits by the nearest inn sipping down on ale and silently gloats that her plan while not what she expected but works just fine. Suddenly the town is being shaken by something that no one could see coming. They were the guards of the Northern Pikes, the most vile and dangerous pillagers the world has ever known and those are from what the survivors say they are and they are here to take Evandor for all its worth. Meanwhile, Aurtura was miles away from the town and after minutes of searching she can now come close to assume the worst of what happened to her beloved until she can hear the faint deep bellowing sobs of someone. someone she as a ranger can feel who it is.

Walking in closely in the bushes Aurtura calmly called out for Jauna's name but Jauna tells her to stay away for she fears what Aurtura will see. But all Aurtura cares is that she can see her lover again and begs for her to show herself. Jauna couldn't but can say what has happened to her that something... happened to her and in her panic, shame and despair tried to take her own life. Aurtura was shocked by this and ask why would she do such a thing and without thinking. Jauna walks up with her thundering footsteps and beholds herself before Aurtura who momentarily steps back in shock. Aurtura wanted to know what has happened to her and without realizing it, Jauna reels back from exposing herself before her lover in the freak state that she is and retreats back but with caution Aurtura stops Jauna by holding on to one of her thick fingers and tells her to stop.

She apologizes for jumping back but all she wanted was to see her lover, her closest friend and companion who gave her meaning again. She doesn't care if she's a titaness because in her lover's eyes she is still the beautiful maiden who she laid eyes on that night in the forests when they made love beyond the town and kept their relationship a secret until now. She'll help her find a way to get her back to normal but only if Jauna can let her help. Jauna looks back over her muscled shoulder and then reaching out with her hand she tells Aurtura that she needs her help. and as they held hands, the ranger wolf smiled back knowing that they can get through this together and Aurtura promises her that anyone who says anything about her body will have to answer to her. But then a loud blast can be heard far from the town and Aurtura looks over the bushes to discover that the town is under attack. Aurtura leaves to her duties as a ranger to stop the threat and Jauna wants to come to but the wolf stops the vixen telling her to stay behind.

Meanwhile, the raiders burned and pillaged all that they can and kidnap some of the ladies including Haela who the leader of the gang have such special "ideals" to do with her and also the sorcerer who, while still drunk is also captured. The leader named Altau has so many things to want to do with the lovely raven girl until a stray arrow nearly cuts down the top of his shoulder and looks back with a stern, furious reaction. It's Aurtura with her bow giving Altau a warning shot demanding that he and his goons leave the town or they'll will in body bags. But before she can react, a shadowy figure ambushes her and after a good struggle, the figure knocks her out. That now leaves Altau with two sexy ladies to play with.

Back in the forest the massive vixen grows ever more worried by the hour not seeing any progress with the saving as her girlfriend can but knows that something bad has happened to her and soon even worst since she hasn't came back and looks over the bushes to see the town glowed a bright orange light. There was a no sign of a party so it can only mean one thing: An invasion is afoot. Her lover is in danger and she has no time to find suitable clothes or any at all and has to go at it in the buff. Running to the town her footsteps pound into the earth shaking with each step, any tree that stood in her way she batted off and even the mightiest tree broke like a twig, her shyness and fear of her body image were washed away with the need to save the true person in her life.
Jauna arrives to spot both Haela and Aurtura which is bad for them as the hordes just start to storm in front of her. At first, the feared her because of her massive body and at are ready for the worst, appearing nude in front of all of them didn't help them much for they're afraid more of getting killed rather than getting beefy eye candy. But when Jauna speaks, her first words were to let her lover go. To which Altau begins to chuckle and then laugh at her for her pathetic attempt and Aurtura as much as she is less embarrassed is now worried to see Jauna put herself in danger when she tells her not to come. Though not much with Haela, who isn't pleased to see her back let alone get a first look at her new body which in her case does look very unattractive. Jauna is really serious to let them go and to leave Evandor and never come back making them explode with laughter when she made ended her threat with "please?".

Altau can't control his laughter and if this was her tactic to get his horde to die of laughter then she certainly succeeded otherwise She'll have to die now. After ordering the troops to regain their composure, ordered them to fire their arrows square at her on the count of three. On the first count the arrows are drawn, on the second Aurtura shouts to Jauna to run but is too scared to do that and on the third they fired their arrows which fly at blazing speed towards the towering muscle vixen and Aurtura can only watch helplessly and Haela wishes that one of them goes into her skull. Jauna covers herself with her massive arms bracing for the worst when actually all she can feel were small taps as the arrows just literally bounce off her pelt and some stop and fall to the ground. Shocked by this, Altau orders his men to keep firing at her until they at least get an arrow in her.

Jauna quickly notices this and walks slowly to Aurtura even after wave after wave of arrows keep hitting her and feels more like rain on her pelt than sharp arrows that can cut through flesh. Then Atlau orders to use one of the heavy heat cannons to burn her alive. Jauna takes cover again to take the full hit of the heavy torrents of liquid fire, which like the arrows have no effect and Jauna just slides it off like water. Altau doesn't know what to do except to order his men to attack her head on, regardless of their objections, he tells them to just do it and attack. This gives Aurtura to help her learn how to use her strength to her advantage. Jauna never once raised a hand against anyone, not even a fly, but if there's a time to learn to fight, now's the time. With each instruction that ranger gave her, Jauna sweeps men off the ground and into the air. Testing the limits of her strength she made a fist and smashed it into the earth cracking it and letting a few who lost their balance to fall in. Walking up Altau is really beginning to be afraid of her but Jauna just wants them to go away.

That's when Atlau pulls out his dagger and presses it against Aurtura's jugular threatening to cut her if she doesn't step away. Jauna's worry turned instantly into fury enough that even Haela is even scared and tries to escape, for a moment they believed Jauna was about to burst when her whole body got bigger in response to her mounting rage and Jauna walks with each pounding step telling him she'll do far worse if he even give her much as a dent in her coat. Dealing with someone who isn't seasoned to take a threat seriously now Jauna poses as the threat. She grabs Altau and furiously tell him that when she wants to her to leave she means it and throws him, sending him flying thousands of feet into the air and disappearing into the clouds. She looks back at the other men who dare want to share the same fate,

They didn't and they all ran for their lives and the people cheered that that horde is leaving their town and after breaking the two ladies free Aurtura embraces Jauna as much as her small arms can against her lover's great body. Not minding one bit of her own nakedness she is glad that she's alright and is sorry for not listening to her warnings but Aurtura tells her that's alright. The townspeople surrounded the two and while some are afraid of her just for her size, the others are grateful even shocked to learn that it's Jauna herself. Aurtura made sure on her promise to find a cure to her problem and she made sure on that. As the town celebrates, Haela grows more and more pissed that her plan didn't go out so well to the point that she just climbs up to the top of the fire vats takes a deep breath tells every one including the couple to just shut the fuck up! Aurtura looks up and asks what's she's bickering about.

What's she's bickering about? The fact that she's always second best to Jauna, it's always about Jauna, when all she wanted is to be loved and not be like god damn Jauna! Even after she had the plot to ugly the fuck out her backfired all thanks to a drunk sorcerer who couldn't tell a summon from the bottle of bad vodka. Aurtura angrily demands that she change her back. But she refuses and just as the sorcerer who earlier escaped to have another hard drink while the fighting was going on orders him to do the job right this time. Still under the influence of heavy alcohol, raises his hands and energy sprouts from his fingers ready to throw the spell, if he remembers the right one this time and throws it straight at Jauna. To save her at the last minute Aurtura pulls out her dagger and leaps in path of the incoming spell. The energy bounces off the blade and flies straight into Haela knocking her off the edge and into the vat of molten fire.

The vat started to react and bubble, leaving the townspeople to fear that it's going to blow. Jauna has to get the vat as far way from the town as possible; She grabs the bottom of the vat and lifts it high above her head. Getting a good running distance as the vat starts to boil over, Jauna with all her might throws the vat high into the sky with enough distance in time for it to explode. The people were saved again. If that vat were to blow while it was still on the ground, it would surely would have destroyed the town. The drunken sorcerer soon about to be ambushed, felt that he screwed himself out of a deserved pay and vanishes before they can get their hands on him, leaving Jauna in an uncertain state but with Aurtura by her side she'll make it work for the better.

A year later, the town is fully restored to its former state after a number of hassles and a harsh winter that stifled much of the reconstruction. The people of Evandor, lived and work happily as if nothing happened, that is except Jauna who is at the open field watching over the town's children as they play happily around even with Jauna herself as some of them attempt to climb her like a mountain which she doesn't mind being most of the time. Scaling that great wide, back, grabbing on to the second-skin tight cloth over her tremendous arm and bicep to reach up to the shoulder. Though she had to tell the kids that her own "peaks" are off limits like last time as one fell deep into her great cleavage. Jauna even playfully shakes her body to add a bit of effect to the fun. Loving them all close Jauna held all fourteen of them in her mighty arms, giving the kids less invincible protector and way more "gentile giant".

Sure many things around the mountainous maiden had to be made to accommodate her new size including all the dresses that gave the town's tailors a true challenge for them to work on. An entire wardrobe and miles and miles of silk were used to make her new dresses, designed not to rip even with the slightest reeling of an arm or reaching for a higher object. Jauna finally got engaged and later married Aurtura in ceremony that changed and challenged every form of logistic around. Regardless of size difference, love-making has never been better between the two as Aurtura now as a lot of vixen to love than before.

On that night Jauna contemplates something and with some courage asked Aurtura that with everything that's happened since her change, would she still love her if she decides to stop pursuing a cure and stay like this forever. Aurtura paused for a moment wondering of the possibilities that befell of having a lifemate bigger, and stronger than a ranger but then this her new wife and she has been through this from the start without any ill will between them. Aurtura held her large hands the same way as the did back in the forest when they first met years ago and tells the vixen, that she will always love him not matter how powerful she gets as long as she can remember that they're more than just lovers, but better friends and a team. Juana grew teary-eyed and embraces the wolf into her great bare chest, thanking her for the support. As muffled and suffocated the after-speech is Aurtura pulls out gasping for air and tells her to be careful next time as the two blushed and sleep the rest of the night away. Overtime, Jauna learned to toughen up and take a hit with the body. Instead of just being a timid titan, a simple flexing of muscle and a tough expression what it takes to keep even the most brutal raiders away. Evandor is proud of it's now two defenders: The ranger and the once timid beauty of the town now dubbed the "Massive Maiden". And from then on, all is right in Evandor.

On the far, far side of the forest, the trees slowly start to crack and wither before slowly bursting into flames, A taloned hand burned the bark it held on to before setting it ablaze. Dizzy and confused from what has happened it had to recollect past events. All she remembered was mad arguing, then a white flash, slowly dying in a vat of molten fire and a explosion. Looking at her hands, she notices they are thicker and more powerful than before, a strange feeling came from her back and discovers she has wings, not ordinary wings but wings of three shades of red to white. Observing more and more, the woman discovers she has been transformed by the spell that drunken sorcerer had for Jauna and infused with the fires of the vat to turn her into some kind of firebird. Not just any plain firebird, A heavy-chested, ripped-as-hell firebird. Haela's new muscular body isn't freakishly huge as her rival but just as strong. At first her comprehension of what she has become brings her to tears but then slowly grows into insane laughter upon realizing she has a body and powers to make all fear her. Even so much as to let out her new powers by throwing a fireball at a rock that quickly melted into a puddle. Haela laughs into the heavens enjoying her new power including her super-strength to boot. Standing taller and mightier than any mortal, even mortal females with that incredibly great rack. Haela stands tall and proud as a Raven of Fire. Her petty pursuit of being loved only got her ridicule and demand for conformity, blinded that there can be someone better than the norm.

Instead her new form is the result and Haela has gotten the message. With no sign or want to find that drunkard and personally "thank" him for all of this, the bitter fire raven makes a simple proclamation: If she can't achieve anything being loved, she'll be more better off being feared. Haela laughs and uses her new wings to rocket off into the sky, leaving a trail of fire behind her as she heads far off into what will soon be her domain fitting to her form, the Fyrelands. Haela will soon have her revenge against the village that ousted her and the couple who are the pain of her life, but for now, fear is her motivation and with a buff bod to match, she'll have no problem having her brand of "fun".

The End.
I was totally inspired from this pic from one of the first and best muscle fur artists RJ bartrop of this: [link] and overtime it came to me.

I did some changes around since it's inspiration not based on and did the following.

-Made a ranger wolfess named Aurtura
-Based the vixen Jauna from the vixen to the right of the piece
-Include a bitter raven motivated by jealousy and a drunken sorcerer
-Add magic and extreme muscle/BE and...

This is the result!

Enjoy
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spacezillazon's avatar
well written.Yeah I wonder how long both of those two the happy couple lives.

a fire bird I wondered what happened to her.interesting story